Awful Words

… No, this is not comments on the latest Potter fabfic, this is just on words. You, know, those little marks in pixels or ink we absorb every day.

Today I was reading a fiction piece that the author had must put out a revised chapter. I’m near the beginning. It opened with a little action, a murder, but this is a villain centered piece, so feeling for the victim is pointless. But that was not what yanked me out of the story,

It was the word ‘various.’  The story said ‘various sofas and seats’ like various said anything useful to establish the description of the room. Were they matching silk and quilted satin? were they Goodwill cast-offs?  Were they brand-new and tacky like a gaudy and cheap bordello?

Various is not a descriptive word.

It wastes space and ink better used for other words, words that set a mood, describe objects, or give some kind of counts.

Don’t use it.

 

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I’ve got a bad feeling about this…

I’ve got a sibling who’s been sampling the joys of online dating. (but, no, not using known and more reputable ones) These sites are so effective at something, the prospective dates all ask for money before a date. The latest has chatted for 2-3 weeks. But a first meeting has been postponed twice and they are demanding that sibling say the “ILoveYou” before they meet face to face.

Being romantic, I believe you can fall in love without a F2F connection, but demanding that is just way too soon. Are they that messed up? (Misery– Get away!) or are they greedy, using that as a feeder to start extorting money from a lovesick target?

I really can’t think of anther reason to demand a declaration of love before you meet. Bueller?

Insights

I was reading a wikipedia entry on a book I virtually wore out as a teen (Gordon R Dickson’s Dorsai book Tactics of Mistake) and wishing I hadn’t misplaced my copy. (yeah, the electronic replacement copy is priced at least four times what I paid for the paperback that is missing)

As I read the entry I realized that I used the novel’s core concept in a fanfic I started writing three years ago. Are the Dorsai that different than the Fett clones? How long do concepts ferment in your mind before they come out to play?

Your Focus is Your Reality

I’ve been writing since ’07. I probably could have started writing before that, especially if you considered the thousands of books in my household and the writers’ track panels I thought a hoot at SF conventions.  But I hadn’t.

I didn’t like writing even short fiction in high school. Family lore says there was an elementary mocking incident, but I don’t remember it. I do remember hating any kind of writing, and perpetually tardy at best for any assignment. I got reconciled a little by high school when I wrote a 30+ page paper on mass drivers as a potential replacement for rockets to orbit. They now are used as rail gun ans amusement rides. I wrote a couple short stories for a friend desperate for material for a college SF magazine… I really do not want to dig those copies out, even if  one was my first fanfic snippet. I enjoyed the griping and successes of writers, cover artists, and editors at SF cons. I highly recommend the ’98 Buccaneer Liar’s Panel audio if you can find it, I didn’t get at the time that a missed meal would have been better than missing the recording.

That snippet was the last non-academic, non business writing for over twenty years. I still had creative outlets in crafts and RPGs, along with a serious reading addiction. I’d sit at the breakfast and read the box. Sometimes I’d even read the fine print for OTC meds. I’d read during commercial breaks and while waiting in lines. Then came a weird skin infection or two, and new books dried up and gas to visit the library was tight too.

I missed new books by favorite authors and decided to boot a game that had been sitting on a shelf for a couple months. I reached the end, outraged that the writers cheated, for blatant meta reasons. Clearly they wanted to clear the deck to have a tabula rasa for a sequel.  There were no convincing reasons in-world for that obnoxious ending.

I could do better.

grains falling through hourglass

In Search of Lost Time by Alexander Boden on flickr, without changes, per Creative Commons.

So went my first fanfic plot, first chaptered story, first novel-length story, first NaNo attempt, and first time my characters grabbed control. (they rarely do anymore, and I’m not sure that’s good or bad)

But after a time creating new adventures with existing universes, I started wanting to do my own and maybe get a half cheese sandwich on occasion. So I’m coming at learning the craft very late and in a hit or miss manner. Some techniques for writing do not help, they strangle my muse. But I keep looking, as I have the most trouble with finishing the story, revisions to pull it all  together.

I backtracked into fanfic, due to RL reasons, but I’m not sure why I almost seem to have a block about writing original stuff again. I should work on two stuck novels, but I spent so much fiddling with them to the point of pain, that going back makes me nauseous. I still believe in the concepts, but… Flash stories dried up too. I do file new story ideas, but have no urge to type.

So I want to finish one of two active fanfics, and use that time for original works. Post more here too, to remind me of that goal. Fanfic is seductive, as you get rapid and sometimes spirited feedback, and this new writer gets very few cheese sandwiches and no feedback. It does affect your motivations. I really need to focus on original stories more.

Coming up with new topics for this blog is another challenge. Today I found an essay collection by R L Stevenson on writing. Whether inspirational or neolithic, it may be useful… Coming Soon.

old metal gears

Sparkles and Fruit of Inspiration

Inspiration can be fickle. I frequently get ideas. I have files and files of ideas. Some are for original fiction, even more are for fan fiction. Even keeping the ideas grouped together becomes an exercise in organization. Some ideas cannot work in some story environments, an insight on FTL communication is irrelevant to a sword and sorcery mood.

So I squirrel them away, like nuts for the winter, awaiting a time when my muse wants to write a romantic horror or expand on a plot hole in a fannish-universe. I have files with additional ideas for my own series, ideas for specific universes, folders with images or links to an article that held the germ of a story. I even have alternate ideas for stories already written, but it starts getting recursive, like “Groundhog Day.”

But I already have too many stories unfinished. Most are just these seed ideas, as I have been recording them since I realized I have a problem. Some have been partly written or even partly posted. Some even have at least one fairly full draft, awaiting an editor/beta, or even a second opinion.

(That is one of the advantages of fanfic, it has a lower standard so you do not get blocked by editing issues like I do.  Sometimes shockingly lower… and errors appear in too many small press and even major imprints today. I get close to crying when I see yet another use of ‘loose’ when character are afraid if they will ‘lose’ a fight. But the lower standard means the writers get offended if their prose was confusing and should be tweaked. But that makes them and their story look worse than the idea deserves. It takes a cool down, but I have taken and updated for questions on my works, but few bother even if I wish to improve my writing. But for me, a softer standard means I can put out stories without too much angst for my lack of a beta or editor) Original works are a different kettle of fish.  Physical prints can’t be updated. And I believe updates make the author look bad.  Updates to fix important errors or missing sections make software companies look unprofessional and incompetent too, but that boat seems to have sailed too long ago. There’s no good reason to copy the software companies.

But the shortage of even second opinions or beta, make editing my NaNos into monoliths of grinding through issues until I hated my original novels. Intellectually, I’m sure they’re decent ideas, but even looking at them another time makes me want to scream.  I guess you could call it block, but the story is already there.  This makes shorter works, especially fanfic ideas more tempting.

And as fanfic ideas reach fruition, and I get feedback if not money, my muse is far more tempted by non-original universes. A description of episodes from a single-season show from the fifties holds story kernels starts the sparkles flowing, enough to feed a score of chapters or episodes.

But I can’t write that fast anymore, and I resist adding yet another writing project to the ten to twenty unfinished works I already have in various stages of block.  I have three active stories, and handful awaiting attention, and I am trying to not start new works    So the more than one idea today got a write-up in one of my idea files… maybe for Nano.

Despite my good intentions, I wrote a humor flashfic this morning and posted it, getting reviews right away.

 

What are we forgetting?

In the hullabaloo about the issues we seem to be fighting about far too often, we should make a greater effort to remember what has been best about our culture in the US. Yes, we’ve made bad decisions and even horrible ones, but we’ve also done some great things.  We are obsessing about the wrongs, which never fixes anything. Too many cheer about the edgy non-heroes, cheer about the heroes who fall, and go on rampages because the older heroes have warts.

Broken Incandescent Bulb

Broken Lightbulb by Kevin Galens — Used under Creative Commons

Heroes are not cardboard or two dimensional. At their best they transcend the current situation and lead in a better direction. And some make deliberate actions that ruin any legacy.  It’s not just of fair to judge them too harshly from another era, as people in future eras will judge you as harshly for your inhumanity. No one likes Carrie Nation, even if she accomplished things.

We all need to list what works about the Great American Experiment, which is having a terrible self induced turbulence. Everyone’s list will differ, but I’d like to see other’s lists.  Mine are today: Enthusiastic, boisterous, not hide-bound, Trying new philosophies, new religions, new traditions even if they sometimes get rejected.  Land of opportunity that even a newly retired Kentucky Colonel can start a new business and finally find success. A land where every minority has equal rights with other groups, A place where empathy for a pig may run amuck and harshest criticism may fall on cowardice in a crisis. A place that looks to a cooperative future, but still gets far too caught up in mob hysteria and riots forgetting old lessons.

Remember. Most of these crises happened before. How did we forget?